Noun poems

Noun Poems

Last week (2.6.14) we finished doing our activated noun poems. Activated noun poems are wrote like this

Trees 

Swishing and swooshing through the air.

Also, an extra challenge was to use personification (giving a human quality to a thing that is not a human) like this

Teddy Bears

Spying on you, listening to your every word. 

Here are some that people in the class wrote:

Birds 

Chirping behind your back planning there next raid on you lunch box.
(Daniel)

Wind

Dancing through the trees and quivering fresh emerald green grass.
(Tuscan)

Windows

A open soul willing to share all it secrets. 
(Daniel)

Sky 

A slightly faded sapphire blue blocked by clouds getting in the way to ruin your, then turning a rosy pink and then over run by constellation.
(Daniel)

The Clay Mound

Hacked at by kids with spades, screaming at the kids to stop but they can not here sound.
(Daniel)